Thematic Essay (Introduction & Conclusion)

A thematic essay is an essay students have to write about a theme, and give two examples in history of the specific theme. An introduction that could work for every essay is:

1. Throughout Global History (theme) has/have a major impact on people.

2. (Theme) is/are…

3. The importance of (Theme) can be seen in… Example 1 & 2.

A conclusion that could also work for every essay is:

1. The example of (Example 1) and (Example 2) clearly demonstrate the importance of (Theme) .
2. (Example 1) is important because….

3. (Example 2) is important because….

Example: Introduction

Throughout Global History wars have had a major impact on people. Wars are battle fought by opposite group to get what they want in exchange. The importance of Wars can be seen The Crusades and The Mongol Conquest.

Example: Conclusion

The examples of The Crusades and The Mongol Conquest clearly demonstrate the importance of Wars. The Crusades were important because it increased culture diffusion between the Middle East and Europe. The Mongol’s Conquest was important because it also increased trading in the Silk Road.